Feedback

From publishing our music video on facebook and making a page for it, we have been successful in getting feedback from our targeted audience. We used facebook to get feedback as it provided a large variety of people to provide us with feedback.
So far the main constructive critisism that we have recieved has been that the narrative isn't very clear because the shots are too quick. I have been thinking of ways we could change this and I have decided that we should add in more shots as we have some more footage for the narrative, instead of making the shots longer as that won't be keeping in with the characteristics of a music video.
Some have also commented on the fact that the drummer is playing slightly out of time towards the end, We should be able to easily fix this when we go back to school.
Overall, the audience have said that it is convincing as a music video and that they enjoyed watching it and that they specifically liked the effects and filters put over the footage.